Pull me into you
Lose yourself in me
Banish my inhibitions
While I set your spirit free
The setting sun gleams golden
Catching dust on fire
Revealing my obssessions
Painting you a liar
Sometimes the world seems empty
When you're filling up my mind
The crowds that push against me
Never cross that hidden line
Pull me into you
Lose yourself in me
Banish my inhibitions
While I set your spirit free
Crush my silly heart to dust
Crack this foolish smile
When I think about your kisses
Makes the hatred seem worthwhile
But my broken thoughts are boring me
You're the only pain I need
So come destroy my world
While the sky begins to bleed
Author notes
This one comes from a very deep well within.... be gentle, but be honest. You are reading my shattered heart, my ridiculous passions, my wide-open secret.
A contest entry
- Make me feel. by Antebellum.
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'Sometimes the world seems empty
When you're filling up my mind
The crowds that push against me
Never cross that hidden line'
I can relate here.
thanks so much for entering..i can feel the pain. -
This has some beautiful wording, dear friend, but I read your AN and know that this is your heart on our computer screens. Hrm. I am sorry that you feel this way!
Hugs to you and I hope it gets better soon. Maybe the "pain" you need will come soon.
My fave part was this "The setting sun gleams golden
Catching dust on fire
Revealing my obssessions
Painting you a liar"
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Thanks hon!! I came up with that line because I wrote this sitting in my garden and the sun was going down and it was doing that thing where the dust dances through and you can see rays touching the ground. It was so beautiful, I had to find a place in here for it.
So very glad you liked it. Thanks for the comments! Hugs!!
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Sister...your pain is my pain~ This is so deeply honest and filled with raw emotion...a part of your soul, so even in pain...it is beautiful.
Blessed be dearest...I love you~
Az
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