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(work in progress)

Torn and tattered
humbled in pain
I can feel now his glory,
and feel now my shame,
down on my knees,
Apart now and tame

With holes in my knees,
my jeans ripped apart,
from falling for you,
my heart crying out

hands in my lap,
they're holding my face,
my tears falling down
crying for grace
I'm pleading for mercy,
I'm pleading for love
I cry out for strength

My father,
my G-d
I'm unworthy to love
still blessed now by promise
and now striving in faith


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