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Mmm Food

I'll eat you up
So you can meet the cat
And the lion, called Bryan

I'll eat you up
So you can sleep
Against my stomach lining

I'll mumble stories
Under my breath
That'll echo down to you

About the ant family
With mum and dad
Who felt a little blue

And when you want
To face the world
I'll let you escape

But I'll always be here
To save you
With my yellow cape.

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This is for you ^_^ ♥

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  • s-i-m-o-n-e
    August 6
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    cool

  • ....

    your though patterns are always so whimsical and off the wal. I love it. What is the yellow cape about though? Thats only part i don't get. Or is it part of your randomosity lol

  • Very good

    I will have to think deeply on this one to get the meaning. Very good write.

  • amelia you are so adorable! lol but really, good poem. i missed you while i was gone! my school blocked allpoetry. anyways, keep writing! ~mary

  • haha this was very funny and cute! XD hee heee.
    i especially liked the second stanza... that was great.
    well actually it was alllll great tee hee hee. anyways i loved this!!!!!
    huggggglllezzz
    adria <3


  • X...
    June 30
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    wow...lol this is the cutest one yet ^_^...


  • CrushPuppy
    June 30
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    "Mmm food" .. *wags tail most egregiously* !

  • THANK YOU MOMMY!
    My God this made me smile the whole way!


    The ant family! And Bryan! Woooooot. & mum :3

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