I am an ignored piece of furniture
like that of a ghost with no home,
the value that was placed upon me
is null, my pain from being a broken
piece a piece none put any
value upon any more.
Thrown away at birth
by a mother who couldn't bother,
a father who was a thief,
shoved off on those who
raised their own, no more
wanted then a dog pile.
Raped, beaten, again thrown away,
this time more broken then before,
lonesome, alone, different,
never fitting, a thing without
value.
Found him in a place I never
thought I would, love bloomed
fully, given completely and thinking
it was returned.
Pain flairs full bloom, death is
close to mind, throw away yet
again a piece with no value,
a ghost with no home.
Author notes
Prompt: ’ve never felt I’ve been valued by anyone. I’m just a waste of space that everyone ignores, like a ghost without a home.”
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Comments
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Aw.. that was such a good write and so sad..
Overall grade: 7/10
Thanks for entering -
THE SIDE PICS DO NOT GO WITH THE REST OF THE POEM
BUT IT IS A VERY GOOD POEM. FULL OF PAIN AND HOPELESSNESS -
Very sad is this piece
Paints such a raw story of the pain and suffering
Thanks for sharing with me and best wishes to you
Julie -
oOo wow tht was deep. Srry if tht really happening 2 u. Good poem.
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Mom,this is such a sad poem.It makes me feel your pain.And to let you know,there are people that love you and value you.We are here and we love you.
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Damn...
Wow this is great, I think this'll beat me in the contest...but still I love it.
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Really good emotion you've shown in this piece, but it's very sad. Just know that I'm here if you need someone to talk to.
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*whines* Sis i value you.....
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i rlly liked this one... it fit the prompt well thank you for entering
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