I was whole while you were here
now I am a broken shell,
twisted, turning, drifting away,
my life has been torn today.
All was right within my world,
but now it is upside down,
I no longer feel as if I belong,
you were here now your gone.
Broken, busted, everything destroyed,
you threw me away,
pain in my heart, pain in my soul,
how is it you could let me go.
Please come back, please, please,please,
don't let me die,
do let me be,
take me back home to where you are.
Because of what we once had
it went so ever far,
you made me laugh and smile,
now all I do is cry.
Take me back to the place I
long to be, take me back to your heart,
don't let this be a good bye forever more
do shut the door.
Author notes
Prompt ant lyrics : "Broken (feat. Amy Lee)"
I wanted you to know I love the way you laugh
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain away
I keep your photograph and I know it serves me well
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
You've gone away, you don't feel me, here anymore
The worst is over now and we can breathe again
I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain
[x2]
'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don't feel like I am strong enough
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
You've gone away
You don't feel me here anymore
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Comments
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amazing poem. Emotional and deep. Thx for being in my contest. Good luck!
( srry i can't applaud)
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Beautiful poem, and I love the background.
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