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Oblivion

Blinded soul

Captured heart

Deception stole

Ripped apart

Hopeless dreams

Tried in vain

Forever seems

Dies the same

Once believed

Purpose desired

So deceived

Fates acquired

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    June 30

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    sometimes it does seem that everything you have dreamed or hoped for just explodes in tiny fragments never to be mended. but faith and beliefs secretly puts all the pieces together only to form something even better in your life.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 29

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    DONE IN VAIN
    THIS LINES STANDS OUT
    ALL IS VANITY UNDER THE SUN
    This is a sad truth
    it is hard not to live life in vain
    to simply enjoy, yet we tend to attach ourselves to temporal, to take one moment, now only notice now is where peace and joy live.
    it appears to be our nature to live in the past or in the future, this is where we fall
    this is where pain comes from
    exceptional write my friend
    God bless you...
    's for you