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Simply a Look

Simply a look
Can
Break your heart

Simply a look
Can
Make you dream

Simply a look
In his precious brown eyes
Can
Hypnotize

Simply a look
May
Break your heart

Simply a look
May
Make you dream

But when I Simply look
Into his precious brown eyes
I dont get hypnotized
I close my eyes and Die.

Author notes

This is the first poem I've ever wrote, I hope ya'll like it

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