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Alice

Atrocity came around
and Alice couldn't be reach.

 

Living near Alice for twenty-four yrs. resounded
with laughter, but couldn't breach
this gap, two initials bark
our memories at the park.

 

I saw you pulled away
in limousines that allay
these feelings that I have for you.

 

Who in the hell is Alice
One more chance to get right for all things anew.

 

The girl next door she laid my heart on a challis,
and still I don't know this girl, Alice.

 

Many chance came one by one,
H.e.l.l with Alice, cause she has heart of malice.

She hurt you till you bleed, and stun
all things of chance.

 

The hell with Alice, she has her reasons
for leaving, but tripped her of treason.

 

She is the girl next door,
and left me once more.

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Prompt:

5. Living next door to alice: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZmsbdJkFsZk&feature=related

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  • very good :D

    my favorite part was "she is the girl next door, and left me once more" this was truely a wonderful poem and i felt the emotions of this poem, thanks so much for your entry!!

    • saddie23
      June 30
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      Thank you

      Thank you for liking my poem and the wonderful comment given. Saddie23

  • hi,

    you still have this reserved, write your poem asap please

  • ok

    5 is yours

  • sorry-

    6 is taken, i didn't have time to post "taken" pick a new number please!

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