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time and space

finally we will touch
utopia in its finest alive
chance for more then words
keeping our breath while heaving
you will come to me
open armed i stand
ultimate dreams come to sight
still unsure
time pushes you back
utter waite of time
please come back
id love you
dont leave ever

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  • lonely4eva
    October 12
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    Good

    A little confusing but good...I like it.


  • Aristophane
    October 6

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    Fine I guess

    That one was a bit offish in a way. I mean I liked it but the typos distracted me and the last line was an utter failure because it sounded quite awkward.


  • Rachel-loves-2
    September 8
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    I love it. its deep.


  • Only waiting on ---
    July 8
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    love

    i love it like i love you