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I Don't Even Know Anymore

It was by chance,
You gave me a glance.
I looked up and saw you smile,
Your eyes glimmer for miles.
You became my closest friend,
I didn't want that to end.
Your arms were my sactuary,
You had my heart, all of me.
You loved me, I loved you,
But what did I do?
You left me alone, crying,
My heart broken, I was dying.
You ditched me for your new friends,
You've changed, new heart, new threads.
You walk by, will you glance?
Who am I kidding, not a chance.




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Prompt: "It's sad when people you know become people you knew. When you can walk right past someone like they were never a big part of your life, how you used to be able to talk to them for hours and now you can barely look at them. It's sad how times change." author unknown

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  • dukeshorts
    August 20

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    when i read this its like a reminder of my screw ups. how i fucked everything up. how much i miss this person. but all i can think of is that their is always a reason someone didnt make it with you to this day. but i wish it werent like that . dont we all? well fuck it . maybe when hell freezes over il find a friendship to die for. maybe not. your poem brings me tears of memories. i wish i hadnt read it.

  • The part that got me was "you ditched me for your new friends". Happened to me too! I guess it only happens to the best of us. Don't know why, but it does. Great job and good luck to u. Check my entry out if u don't mind. U may b able to relate.

  • Your arms were my sacturary,
    sanctuary

    My heart broken, I was dieing.
    dying

    thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie