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Last Chance

Mesmerized;

every time I see you,

my mind goes crazy,

and I don't know what to do.

 

Tongue-tied;

I open my mouth to speak,

not a word escapes,

I feel meek.

 

Paralyzed;

I want to kiss you, 

but my body doesn't move,

but I need to move, I have to.

 

Terrified;

Like nothing between us ever occured.

you take one last glance,

and leave without a word,

Author notes

Paralyzed;
I want to kiss you,
THROUGH THE PHONE
hahaha

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  • Bluetempest
    June 29
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    Good

    I like it. I can feel this. I feel this about a girl everyday. Awesome write!


  • Nakatrea
    June 29

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    ha ha cute. Nice to see you around here

    Your form is great. love it

    Kat