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Nothing

So depressed am I want to express my cries
so obsessed am I want to only try
I am sad I feel lost
I'm going down no end in sight
at what cost
do I go through yet another lonely night

I only want to love her
I've done nothing wrong
so unsure as to how long
so insecure does she still hear my lover's song

I want to see just a glimmer of hope
without it not sure I can cope
without you I'd lost without direction
what am I I am everything with you
nothing without you

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  • Leela
    June 29

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    this is very sad! you can make it.. you have a great flow in this write once again. very nice job.


  • Vickie Rosa
    June 29

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    BEAUTIFUL

    Its so sad my friend, nothing worse than a broken heart, this was elligent in style. Such talent within you, you have to keep writting my friend. Peace be with you