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Nothing

Tears run down
so real

Pain echoes through
so unreal
so serene

No where to go
Hiding the pain
in plain sight

Dreaming someone will see
hoping it wont happen
wanting someone to care
knowing they don't

needing to escape
from a prison
The door's not locked

no one is standing in your way
they line the walls
crowding you
but leaving you alone

can't escape from the nothing

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