Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Granny Smith

 

 

 

 

existence is
juicy; crisp
with a core sweeter
than the concept
of heaven
and
hell


the first theory -
explosion of germination
fell from a tree
and span in orbit
around genius
for less than a moment

yet that blink
was long enough
to create life

 

 

 

 

Author notes

written for a class i'm taking on here. thought I'd post it.

In a list

.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • Nangaleema
    July 3
    Edit | Reply
    compelling thoughts. i like the energy in this.


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    June 30

    Edit | Reply
    awesome! don't know about the class but the poem is great!
    thanks for sharing...peace an dlight always in all ways, kp


  • dissapearing-scars
    June 29

    Edit | Reply
    I'm guessing biology.
    Either way it's good.
    I'm fan of nature,
    Anfd I like your attitude.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    June 29

    Edit | Reply
    so good. the bit of tang a bite will give can also push us to plant more seeds... and life goes on.

    love your writing.


  • Flyergirl
    June 29
    Edit | Reply
    nice use of metaphor


  • white stone gold member
    June 29
    Edit | Reply
    This is so well done. Deep and wise and beautiful.

1 - 6 of 6