my love for you
gose dark and deep
but my lips are sealed
for its secrets i will keep
keep away,locked inside
for every thing has a reason to hide
hide for life
to keep from death
i will not give a breath
no hint for you
no hint to take
only hints that are fake
,but what i say now is true
i will be forever belong to you
Author notes
in all truth i didnt mean to write this
im doing home work right now and well it just kinda floted out on to my paper so i finished it
kinda like it
Comments
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Bravo
Good job in this piece even the way you say that was written i know how it is cause sometimes it happens to me I'm supposed to be doing something else and then a poem comes to mind great job
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lovely
its a nice piece..
rhymin is good..
there's a spellin error in d second line..it'll b 'goes' instead of 'gose'..
the poem is fantastic..we all wanna keep our love secretive at some point of time...ur poem conveys ur efforts to keep ur love hidden very well...
keep writin..
take care..
-parth
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Very Good
Floating out is a great way to write
Good for you
Rick
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