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Time and elephant

Time is that elephant to the blind.

Interpretations are varied in kind.

No one's wrong in his perception

If considered one’s own limitation

Time’s too big an entity to behold

Within two eyes how can one hold

it’s changing color and shape true

It’s varied forms and run to and fro!

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  • DragonBlue gold member
    August 14

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    Linear time, unlike circular time, is not eternal and understands naught, but it's own demise. Humans are the only species that thinks and lives in 'linear time'. All other species and the earth herself, stays within its cycle of circular time. Time is the fourth dimension. Your poem stimulates much thought, thank you for an excellent read.

    Blessed Be~
    )O(
    DragonBlue


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    July 28
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    A very beautiful write about time, and I see why you like the subject. Lovely rhyme scheme too x x


  • RainbowSky
    July 15
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    this is fun; i really enjoyed reading it