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rrdo broke my heart

I can't believe you followed me this far
I try to get away from your madness and the shame you brought to me
I can't go back to what I was for you

My thoughts are as simple as breeze
I often wonder of my sin
I know I did wrong but why can't you leave me be?

This heart I gave to you ached
as your promised to heal it
you tore it apart to see how it beats
you used me blood line to keep you alive

I don't sleep anymore
and thats okay with me
however most of the time I can still feel your breath over me

those nights I wish I could take it all back
never kissed you, never held you, never let you have my love

on those nights I die
and when morning comes I try desperatly to live
so why must you follow?
my life is not yours to mandate
it is a sorry lump of flesh, thoughts, and feelings
beacuase you BROKE my HEART

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 22
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    oohhh..

    this is very sad..sorry to read of your brokenheart..sucks big time..