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Glimpsing Glances











Yearning salvaged in temptations,
a chime unheard, atoned to a simple song,
a beating rhythm that grows
like a womb in a mother's belly,
prayer-lips parted:

spying a delicacy unseen,
polka-dotted freckles
and a bossom unhidden,
the cleavage cannot keep

  a secret whispered
    within iris-words.
















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  • whitecoffee
    June 29

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    This poem is beautiful and heartbreaking, the last lines very strong. I like the contradicting language, maybe that is what gives it its sadness...Thank you so much for entering this.