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At the Park

Pigtails flying,
squeals of joy,
sisters spin
on playground toy.

Push and pull
and ‘round it goes -
tugging smiles,
flapping clothes!


Author notes

prompt: Rorschack ink blot http://www.psych.usyd.edu.au/psyche/rorschach/ror1.JPG

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  • waydownuponjoy
    October 29
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    I loved it!

    It's always quite sad when we can't post the pic (inkblot) with our poetry because we can't afford the 'elite' membership! but you had me smiling with this imagery and especially after viewing the link! Too cute! j y

    oops ... I see that I've been here before but this was a good one for me to reread and take another look at the 'blot'.


  • azure85 gold member
    July 3

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    Oh, this is cute. The kids are having fun at the playground, and you made a delightful poem out of the spot. Thank you so much.


  • waydownuponjoy
    July 1
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    Now who would of ...

    thunk that? Very cute and so fun to find. joy


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    June 29
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    Yes, I see it in the ink blot!