You told me that you loved me
then you slept with her.
You told me you would keep me safe,
then you walked away.
You said I was beautiful,
then you called me stupid.
Why am I here when you hurt me
with every breath.
I love you and always will
but you tore me down.
I don't know what to do
maybe I belong beneath the ground.
You would like that wouldn't you,
I wish I could make that true.
I hate myself more then ever,
I wish I was dead.
You said you would not abuse,
but you just did.
My feelings run deep,
my sadness is true.
Why can't I just disappear
from the face of earth and you.
You would like that,
you would be so pleased.
Perhaps I will make your dreams come true
I will just disappear into the ground.
You don't care you lied to me,
f...k this life, let it go.
Author notes
Not sure if this was exactly what you were looking for but I tried and it is how I feel about how he did to me. He called me stupid, told me I was his puppet and the puppet master cut the strings.
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Comments
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thank you for entering ... the ending is stark and cold. The reader can feel the emotions being felt.
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Yes, very powerful. I liked this very much and think you'll do great in the contest
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WOW... that was really good and deep. Plz dont disapear or hurt yourself. My friend had the same problems. Good luck ( srry cant applaud no points)
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