In the "Garden of My Mind"
I forever seek to find.
All the love that we shared
that proved how much we cared.
The days that we played
stars in our eyes we displayed.
Sometimes we toiled in work
for our duties we did not shirk.
We walked our paths together
for precious memories to gather.
Our time together seemed to fly
We knew we would part by and by.
The treasured memories are there
though days be dark or fair.
Those treasures I always find
in the "Garden of My Mind".
A contest entry
- Love & Life After Death by Shantti.
1000 points, ended September 12, 52 entries
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When reading this does it bring treasured memories to you?
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The bliss of love is always a "garden". Yes it brought many treasured and happy memories.
Thank you!
Thank you for entering this is beautifully done.
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The garden in my mind...forever will they stay as memories of the past. Wonderful description of love! Wow...sigh...Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us here on AP. ~Sie
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Truly lovely work here
Yes we must tend and keep that garden within our minds unscathed and filled with memories of love indeed . A place where te soul plays to its hearts content
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This is a delightful write. A lovely story of a Life together and precious memories.
LadyDragonwyck
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It sure does...
Amazing peice of writting... you've penned this down pretty well and it has an overall emotional touch.
Brings back some lovely memories.
"Our time together seemed to fly
We knew we would part by and by." -- SO TRUE
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