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A few mistakes

I've made a few mistakes in my Life
And what is the worst, I continue to make
such mistakes till now which better knows my wife
but I'm just going indifferent. Mistakes I just can’t forsake.

What you call it I don't know but for me
I'm quite comfortable with my mistakes
And I don't even fear that they'll end up with me
Only I fear, if I forsake, I'll fall in another set of mistakes.

They are after all my known set of mistakes.
By now I'm getting quite handy with them.
The time of changing friends I've left behind. Mistakes
anew I fear I'll not be able to digest. So I rear them.

Which mistakes I live up with do you wish to know?
Please restrain. I’m very sorry. I can't let them fly
from eye to eye, ear to ear, mind to mind, because if I do
You'll surely laugh. You’ll say lol and I'll get angry. So I defy.

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