Stolen from the sea of time,
A handful of moments
Drift like clouds
To rain upon
My life;
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Sound like cathartic music
To the dance steps
Of my soul
Author notes
Inspired by the following picture prompt:::
http://media.photobucket.com/image/rain%20and%20lightning/spydergirl67/WEATHER%20rain%20storm%20lightning%20wind/RAIN_BOYS.jpg?o=18
A contest entry
- Let The Rain Fall by bookworm987.
400 points, ended July 12, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can well see why this beautiful piece collected its award.I popped over to see the image you did an excellent job of interpretation it
Excellent a joy to read
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Woah! That's one cool shape poem!!! Lovely write this one! I do apprecaite brevity and imagery
congrat on the bronze and I really like the last stanza.. Great ending
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THANK YOU
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Ah dear one, sweet khahar joon, you penned it with the sweetness of your heart and spirit! Ah I was just flying through people's author pages who were my favorites on this community. Indeed you're a favorite and I won't be tired of reading such good poetry. The imaginary were all limpid reminding me of how much I missed for those fresh rain-drops!
Thank you, dear, for sharing your poetry with us 
~Massy~
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Very nice take on the picture prompt. Very simple yet depth is still there. I always was afraid of the rain and thuderstorms as a kid. now I think they are great. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck.
Leance L
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So Lovely
Beautiful imagery to flow with the lovely form of your poem. A delight to read. Take care. Sandy
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love the visuals and the emotions in this poem. origional. thanks you for entering- best of luck!
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what a great translation of inspiration given by the picture prompt. I like the way you spaced the words for dramatic effect. Great job! Good writing and great presentation!! peace and light, Kendal
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LOVELY!!!!!
Even a pouring rain can bring calm and joy to the soul!
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Short and sweet. Great work, very enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing!
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