I've been there sometimes,
when I was still young.
I felt love and I felt kindness,
From everyone.
I had my share of laughter,
And pain too!
I had lived in my family house,
And still I do!
I don't feel the same anymore,
Though no one has changed.
I grew up, yes I did,
But my love is the same!
I left this house once before,
I had a house of my own.
But I never called any my home,
For love is not the only think I look for.
My home is where I have peace
of mind and soul!
But in the whole world, I think
There's no more!
Peace is trully hard to find,
So I think I will make a choice!
Either to stay on Earth, destroy it out,
Or build a home on Mars, completely alone!!
!!
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G L O R I O U S G I F T
A contest entry
- all-day quickie. (payitforward) by dieu..
400 points, ended June 29, 7 entries
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"Peace of mind and soul" - yes, something we are all looking for, I think, and you are right, it is so hard to find! Although I feel your solution to the problem might be a bit extreme, lol. Good luck in the contest
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Thnx for your comment, Really appreciate it...
& You're totally right about the solution, because I really can't find a good solution for this, I changed so many faces, so many places, yet the problem is there!!
Well, I wish I just can live with it till I can come up with some proper solution..
Thnx again
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