I fell in love once
a long time ago
with a man
of silver eyes
that reminded me
of the stars.
But recently you see
I fell in love again
this time with a fella
whose eyes reminded me of the sky
It was like he had reached up
and stole the blue from the sky.
And then there was that fella
with the sea green eyes
and I know that me and blue eyes
and to part.
I couldn't beleve it though
when I met eyes of Gold
they hypnotized me
and I had no where to go.
Yet to this very day
I await
a man with ever changing eyes
then perhaps
I will feel something inside.
Author notes
t r e k k e r g i r l my prompt used was the word spherical... I thought that eyes fit in with that catagorie.
A contest entry
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400 points, ended June 29, 7 entries
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Comments
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Interesting poem, and it could be applied to a great many things. There is always that one feature that particularly attracts us to a person - and don't we wish we could meet the one who combines all! Good luck in the contest
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put which prompt you used in the AN, please.
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please put your name in the AN, like so: q u i x o t i c .
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