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Penetrate

Your eyes they penetrate through me
ripping through my skin
leaving me exposed
to your gaze

Your gaze says more
then words could ever express
as you cast your dark eyes
up and down me

Your look of hate
towards me
it leaves me cold
and empty

Your look of utter distaste
i used to love you
i search in your eyes
for that man

Your eyes they penetrate right through me
searing my skin
making me realise
that my love has turned to hate

Your eyes
they look through me
but tell me, can they see?
just how much i hate you?

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  • Powerful

    such energy released when love turns to hate portrayed so well in your poem