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Broken Wings

bruised and battered
like a bird
with broken wings
that has fallen out of the sky
paralysed by
pure fear
and your rage

laying still....i wonder
will i ever be free from you
you walk away
leaving me again
with
broken wings
and a
bleeding face

You return
you look at me
bend down
picking me up again
apologising,
sorry
for your
indescresions

In your dark eyes
i search..
for anything
other then rage
i long
for just a bit
of humanity
and love

I wonder
if my broken wings
and broken heart
will ever heal
itself


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  • leo2
    July 6

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    Those outer wounds can heal over time but the inner scars continue to hurt much, much longer. I can only hope this is fiction and not a domestic reality.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • KyleBerg gold member
    July 1

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    Powerfully emotional.
    Those people who mistreat us yet always come back when we're too defeated to reject their help... terrible, aren't they? =(
    Thank you for sharing this wonderfully creative piece of writing.


  • boiledegg
    June 29

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    “I wonder
    if my broken wings
    and broken heart
    will ever heal
    itself”

    Yes, it can happen. Time heals. And, only you can change that!

    I enjoyed the read. Nicely done!