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Akin to Chess, Perhaps?

It's only a lie

Oh, but it feels so good

Have you ever tasted something so fine
To sit wafer thin and light on your tongue
To simply melt in your mouth
To satisfy every worldly craving
And then some?

There are several players in this game
And only one of which
Should not be named
Only one of which to be hurt, to feel used
That can never be white washed
No matter how hard I try

The only one that is not a toy

I know it aches
I know how acidic the aftertaste can be

But it feels so good...

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  • sevnsyn silver member
    June 30
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    Great

    I love your work