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groping in the fog...
we try to find
a meaning
stuttering in expression
of a feeling
a thought
the person within the mist peers out
and no-one,
no-one
sees
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Author notes
the fog is a reference to language... the means by which we try to share and communicate ourselves
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. The choice of words, the flow are all excellent. I didn't know about fog, it's good to learn something new everyday.
I really enjoyed reading your poem and thanks for sharing with us.
~Massy~
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Highly perceptive write ...
and evocative of far too many dark moments in all our lives, I suspect. Good job here.
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Thank you, e
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Ah..and this what the truth is..you have touched the lose..and made this piece.a wonderful poetry..well done..thank you so much for this piece...
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thank you, P
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language is for the ears...true communication is given and felt from the soul...
I love your writing here. thanks for sharing. keep up the great work. peace an dlight, Kendal
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Many thanks
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beautiful
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above
Thank you.
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