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Rain!

Rain in Maine
water logged,
pruned right up.

Did the less rain dance
yesterday morn
didn't work
oh how I scowl
one more day
a soggy wet towel.

Chippers coat
matted and wet
slugs are ah' happy
mud slide into lettuce.

Let us all pray
for a sunshine day.

Author notes

It has rained for a dang month! Really, really gettin' sic of it. Garden is hurtin' and everything I own is damp!

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  • albymyheart gold member
    August 9

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    Here in Oz we always seem to be praying for rain. This is a great light heated write on the other side of nature's ills. Yes, I agree...bring on the sunshine Damn it! Well done...Alby

  • tsavo
    July 17
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    Oh yeah i can relate.


  • Tweedle Dee
    July 14

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    Awe that sucks! I loved your poem though. LOL You never can tell or TO THE HECK WITH IT. 'You never can judge a book by its cover OR title'. Thats what I meant lol. And the little poems like these are the most heart wrenching and frustrating at all lol. Coming from the writer that is. ;-)

    BE happy. It'll be sunny before you'll know and then your garden will dry up and you'll be begging for rain all over again lol. (my gma has a garden and I get it from her ALLL the time)

    - your fashionable dee.


  • parenchma
    July 13
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    We will take all you can spare down here; Open the door, blow hard, SW...


  • Rheea gold member
    June 29

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    Brother your rainy day blues are coming through loud and clear.. So what have you been doing?
    What kind of trouble in the woods I am anxious.
    to the computer and let me know if you need to me lock and load.

  • Amen

    Its a beautiful day today & we had sunshine yesterday here in NJ...hopefully we can keep it around for a while at least... very well said - lets pray for a sunshine day...
    let the sun come through
    let the skies be painted clear blue
    another night sparkling with stars
    another day shines crimson
    this is just what little we seek
    from our lips to your ears
    let this prayer be heard by you...
    Oh Lord let the sun shine through

    See... I'm praying with you

    Take care Minoo

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