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I want to let go (i just don't want to hurt anymore)

I'm drowning in you
im suffocating
i know what i should do
still i cant move

why cant i let go?

paralized by your gaze
replayed in my head
havnt seen you in a year
crying alone in bed

what is wrong with me?

unable to stop
against my will
i go on
loving you still

why does it hurt so much?

wishing for your touch
I just want you to look this way
loosing my mind
still loveing you more every day

why does it hurt so much?

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