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Beauty

Beauty

Beauty fills your house;
Spills across your yard.
Cannot touch your soul
Or your heart; so hard.

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  • Ellis gold member
    July 20
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    Good One

    A stuck up chick

  • poets whisper
    July 3

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    The last line was very surprising. A short entry with lots of impact. Whoever this is for or about .... well, they at least moved your muse thank you for entering. Nice job.