Sand in my toes
The feeling so carefre
And no one knows
Who you are today
Trials you've dealt with
Pages you want to erase
None of that matters
Not in this place
Float in the ocean
Stare at the sky
Ignore all commotion
No need to wonder why
Peaceful melody sings
And I feel it within me
At one with nature
Content to let it be
Desire to stay
Worries all forever gone
But that is not the way
Tomorrow I'll go home
Author notes
I wrote this on my Blackberry after being at the beach all day and staring up into the stars..
A contest entry
- Summer Vacations by guardianhost.
550 points, ended July 14, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I first read this cus I saw that you said you wrote it on your blackberry..I do that a lot when something comes to me, just store it in my memo pad on the BB (love it)...great write here, it's peaceful, and it's nice to have a place that nothing matters and everything is just a blank canvas for your mind and you past is what you make it...of course then you have to go home like you said...sometimes that is unfortunate...thanks for sharing
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congrats on goldie and very beautiful piece indeed yes its nice to be free of worries even if its just for a day or so well done be proud cheers glenn
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Tranquil and delightful read
Excellent flow - well done .
All the best in the contest
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Thank you very much!
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