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Matchstick Lovers

Matchstick lovers
Watch and burn
Bright, unrequited fires
Flickering in the breeze

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  • Tamera
    June 30

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    I like the metaphor in this on two levels. The first the matchstick, sudden flares. The second "flickering in the breeze" some love wavers at the slightest pressure, others refuse to go out in typhoons, and you can never predict which ahead of time.


  • Fox.
    June 28
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    nice.