our love cripples me
trips me up and i cant breathe
it's not going anywhere
but i cant seem to let it go
to let you go
would leave me feeling so alone
and i'm not ready for that
just take my heart and have it back
you can have it back
i still can't figure out how all of this went down
and why things turned out this way
one mistake changed everything
one mistake changed everything
i wish i could take it all back
people think we're crazy, they say we're blind
i use to not believe them, but i'm starting to think they're right
but it still doesn't matter what they say
cause they can't make me feel this way
i wish i could take it all back
our love cripples me
trips me up and i cant breathe
it's not going anywhere
but i cant seem to let it go
to let you go
would leave me feeling so alone
and i'm not ready for that
just take my heart and have it back
you can have it back
this valentine's day is just not the same
for better or for worse?
i'll never know, i need to know
i'll never know
Author notes
i wrote this when i was lovesick. everyone told me that this boy wasn't right for me, but i was convinced otherwise.
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
A lot of people go through that heartbreak, and I think that they would all be able to relate to this poem
it is well written, and so descriptive! Wonderfully done
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