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Roses are red

Roses are red,

Violets are blue

my life has no meaning

without you,

I know you will never see

these words,

but if you did you would

laugh and turn away.

 

Alone, lost, forever gone,

I love you with eternity,

again you say I have done wrong,

you will not read these words,

my love for you was true,

    (still is)

 

 

 My life is over now,

what do I care,

one has said I am a worthless 

retard and did not deserve you,

I know that they are right

I am what they say,

I will rectify that one day.

 

I wish you could see in my heart,

I wish you could feel the pain

of my love for you while my tears

fall like the pouring rain,

sleepless nights, longer days,

good bye to me, no one cares.

 

Roses are red,

violets are blue

gone is the love

between me and you,

it was my fault, it was as

always my err, so guess 

what .....

 

 

       I have given up

          I have gone away

              Permantly from this life

                  No more living is your wife.

Author notes

This is written for the man I love. I will always love you One day maybe you will see this but I doubt that you will or even care I am sorry about the anniversary of you loss and I hold on to mine. I love you.

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  • this is so very sad mom

  • Awesome like these other ppl who comment you it was emotional. I loved it! I liked also that you made it ryhem at the begining. thx 4 being in this contest good luck! ( srry i can't applaud dont have points)

  • This write is very emotional, very sad, and yet speaks beautifully. You did a wonderful job.

  • Lovley take on it..sad..yet..beautiful
    Dont know if that made sense but found this one so far the best

    Good luck

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  • Miss Macabre silver member
    June 28

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    So sorrowful and hopeless. You did the prompt well, it went with the theme of this poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • nice, full of emotion
    may the best poem win

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