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MaN Or DogG

          You
      come to me
      when I call.

          but yet you
      walk on two feet.


          You
      answer the phone
      when your friends
      call,from there you
      hit the streets.


          You
      scatch at the door
      at night for me to
      let you in.

         
          I
      Have my bags packed
      I'm out the door,
      Adios! my friend.!
     

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    September 3

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    Cute

    lol So adorable I would too have kicked him to the curb.

     

    Keep writing my friend a little humor we can all use a great deal of some of yours. Keep penning!

     

    God bless dear heart!

    Sharon

     

  • Bob Fox
    July 3

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    Poet

    I like this piece. Perhaps we are better with a dog. Being used by one that only seeks thier own needs can really drag the other down. Nicely penned.

  • hahaha this was awesome and really funny. i loved it! yeah, this guy could totally go on a leash hahaha
    this was amazing. once again, i loved it!
    huggggggglezzz
    adria <3


  • NickRhyme silver member
    June 29
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    Another awesome poem. Funny but still delivers a message. Great work.

  • thanks very much

  • Bobby41
    June 28
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    This gave me a laugh which I need very much right now, I love dogs I collect stuffed, ceramic and pictures of them.

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