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Hallowed Patch

Skewered skin
swallowed open flame

hallowed eve's
forbidden name

straw protruded
where feet belonged

shuffling beneath moon
singing ghastly songs








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Prompt: jackolantern (20 words)

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  • Bob Fox
    July 4

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    Poet

    Nicely done. Apicture painted by your words and I can feel the chill of the wind on that cold October night.


  • Scyphon
    June 28

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    O man this is an awesome poem
    I love the rhyme and tale behind it all
    thank you for your entry, take care and be well