"this is right and that is wrong"
"those aren't the lyrics to that song!!"
"can't you face it! we are lost!!"
"since when have you been the almighty boss"
"why do you always have to put up a fight"
"oh god! you dumb guys can't do anything right"
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Quickie 2 by Scyphon.
600 points, ended June 28, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think
Comments
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haha i really enjoyed reading this. and i have to agree with you that guys are VERY VERY VERY stupid! haha most all of the time you wanna yell at then "HEY SHUT UP!!" haha you got this poem spot on!
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Clever arraingement of quotes making good end rhyme. Well Done.

Dennis


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yes many men cant do anyhing right
always fight for them to be right
even if they forget what its about
I think they just want to be on top
Most guys are very dumb
thank you for your entry
take care and be well




