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You did not know I cried

You did not know I cried-
Rain fell fast through the wood-
But tears ran my eyes dry
For I knew that soon we
Would die.

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  • xXMe17xX
    June 28

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    I LOVED THIS:

    You did not know I cried-
    Rain fell fast through the wood-
    But tears ran my eyes dry
    For I knew that soon we
    Would die.

    but last sentence should be removed

    xxx

    • ccfly
      June 28
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      Thanks! The last line was going to be part of a second stanza that I deleted lol, I didn't mean for that to be there.