She lied,
she said you had left.
She got me to come to you,
then she trapped me with you.
I didn't know you,
but I should've known better.
I should've listened to my sister.
It seemed like forever,
I was trapped in that house.
Though it was only one night,
the one I'll never forget.
The night that my innocence,
trickled down my leg,
and onto your hips.
The night that my crying,
was drowned out by quiet moaning.
The night my love,
was unwillingy transfered
That dreadful, non-quiet night,
of new pain, and new memories.
A contest entry
- Abuse and fear. by WednesdayJade.
1250 points, ended August 5, 59 entries
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Me Your Troubles by KatherineAnne.
550 points, ended July 8, 59 entries
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Wow.
Great imagery in this piece. It must have been really hard to write this. Thank you so much for entering this poem.
And I'd just like to say that someone who goes through this shouldn't have to deal with so many questions like the ones that xXMe17xX posed.
Thank you for entering and goodluck in the contest.
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That was hard to read. It even made me sick to my stomach. Thank you for entering this poem in my contest. Good luck.
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is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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It is a good thing, that means you displayed your emotions well in this short poem. = )
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oh ok.
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what a nice poem. words are picked perfectly for this poem. nice! is this a true poem?whats the story behind it?tell me pliz?
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