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Afternoon

At the base of the hill
A mud-brick hut

Dust on the road
Mist on the mountain

Tom and Jerry inside
In black and white

50 ruppees for a Coke
In a frosty scratched bottle

Up the hill
I pop the top

Curtains shift in the wind
I turn on the fan

Author notes

I wrote this poem while in India.

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