HAZMAT
Having dark shadows looming
A power so dark
Zones of darkness
Magic exists
A shadow rider rides
Taking the innocent
Allen Hollandsworth
©6/28/09
A contest entry
- SCARE MY PANTS OFF! by Jade.Butterfly.
1800 points, ended July 10, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Brilliant
Short and excellent I love it good poem and dark
Good luck in the contest.
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thank u glad you enjoyed it
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shorty and very chilling brilliant thanks for entering and good luck
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well u said dark
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it was certainly that indeed .thanks heaps
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good that is how wanted this one
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This is definitely different, Allen. I like the idea of using words of the day to prompt yourself into writing. Good job.
Lily ♥
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thank you sis
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another great poem
good, but not enough to scare me -
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glad you like
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oooh spookey, lol king himself, or better yet herbert would be proud, nicely penned
T
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Smiles thank you Mrs. T
i have more that even scare me
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short and sweet and reminds me of eragon the king powerful friend with the dragon of dark magic
this is nice and good -
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thank you
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WOW!
This was really good as well.
I love the word choices in this.
The only thing is..The text was really dark I had to highlight it. But a really good write!
-Mandi
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i need change background
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