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A sturdy view

Humanity is dead
Sound out the bells in forgotten towns
Call out the hearses - fast and sleek
Hear the mourners sob and weep
For I tell you now - humanity is dead

A broken heart can be mended
A broken body can be healed
A broken mind can be medicated
A broken soul can be saved
... How I wish I could be as well

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  • chasingtheday gold member
    July 3

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    Humanity is dead
    - i will disagree i am alive and i am here right now speakingin your poem that is not dead.