Why is it that I seem to be
The only one who understands
It's a necessary process
All this blood that's on my hands
It's survival of the fittest
So everybody else must die
It's nature, right? And nature kills
That's why I end those worthless lives
No, I do not feel remorse
For those of you who are now dead
You would do this too, to stop
The ticking in your head
Author notes
well, i've been feeling down lately, and i thought i'd write a nice, cheerful poem to pick me up, lol
A contest entry
- Poetry in Opposition (Round 1) by Progandother.
900 points, ended August 10, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What say you?
Comments
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...aaah...the look into the mind of a serial killer...these seem to vary from person to person...and of course when I take a stab at it I usually fail miserably...
...the road you seem to have taken with this is the structured and organised speech of a deranged person with a very well masked rhyming structure of ABCB (always good to mask things of course)...and it's straight to the point...no flowery metaphors to cover it...just a serial killer saying "I will kill you if I want to"...which is of course how most psychopathic minds function...
...also like the background...goes with the word "ticking" in the final stanza really well...
...very well done and good luck in the contest...
Oliver
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hahaha love love love...you know who i am thinking about
muhahahaha...yep yep =D
Stephanie ♥
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wow
people scare me sometimes... i like it
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