Lightening strikes
and the moment we were just in, dissolves without a trace
Leaving us in limbo, a silent room whose screams can't be ignored.
Your face is no longer mine to gaze upon
as you turn your back and hunch away.
My mind rebels, pounding with determination
Never listening to deadned limbs or tired eyes-
It just keeps on going, fueled by fear
Tortured by doubt... I simply can't lose you.
As each heartbeat hammers loudly against your chest
It echoes a countdown, of our limited moments.
No, I can't just sit here and watch everything fall
apart right in fromt of me.
Heal me from this terrible affliction,
This state of numbness, negativity.
I'll pay anything for my emotions back
Only to give to you, to grant you everything you've ever desired.
I'm yours for as long as you'll keep me.
Author notes
Its raw. Its real. Its probably shit... But its exactly as it should be.
So, what do you think!?
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thats awesome
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greatness
The theme reflects you a lot - that love of the moment but fear of the next. And you expressed it brilliantly! As for it being a Raw write, wish mine were as good. Almost all mine are raws now for the past 2 years, wouldn't change it!
=]
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I love that last line, jealous you wrote it lol
love the first few lines too. can see it playing out in my head.
desperation and anguish portrayedbrilliantly xxxx
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"I'm yours for as long as you'll keep me."Fucking brilliant.
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