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Wall

The Strangest thoughts are
Swirling through my head
I look inside the door
Ands see something
I can't recognize
My demons are
Feeding
On
His
Li
gh
t

Please tell me what you think

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  • Fission
    June 29
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    I love it. Very haunting. And it leaves you wondering... =o


  • Skawe
    June 28

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    Hi. Wow, I much like this, especially how you split up light - it gives it so much more emphasis. Is this sort of thoughts you're having while pilgrimaging?

    Also I think Me demons should be my demons?
    Don't get shot.