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Must be somethin' inside


Okay, so here's the thing -

It's Not the 80's anymore.
2009, where did the time
go? Don't Drink.
Don't Smoke.
Don't write. Anymore.
(in case you didn't know)

I'm like a poster-child for politically correct.

absolutely Perfect, I suspect -
Except, Imperfection
did have its benefits,
Cheap thrills their place.

a Drink. a Smoke.
a Naughty ditty or three
could completely cure
the completely P.C. in me,
no doubt.

But, you know, it is 2009.

If it was the 80's,
Adam Ant would be tonguing me
and not the words to a song
and he sure as hell
wouldn't be wondering,
"What do you do?"




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  • Brazos silver member
    July 5
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    So there you are! I thought you had fallen off the face of the earth...NOT! Don't let the passage of time ruin you. You're so...you're such...whoa, I better hold that thought right there, mmmmm.

    Lovely write by a lovely lady, it's so not PC, LOL.

    Why doncha keep'em coming for a while...whoops, was that PC?

    Brazos


  • Talia
    July 3

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    I was just a lil kiddie winkle in the 80's

    Bout bloody time you posted.,, WTF has life done to you, for you to behave in such a way. I mean whats the fun in being good all the time? I'll have a drink and a smoke for ya lol


  • macandrew
    June 30

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    Sure had a blast in the 80's holding onto the rock of the 70's and searching for the bottom of the bottle.

    "But, you know, it is 2009."
    A treat to read (and remember).

    John

  • I'd trade my ho hum life for some cheap thrills anyday. Hahaha. You keep saying this sucks but each time I read it I find something else to like about it so shut up.

  • Jonny Zero
    June 29
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    Yeah I really like this one.

  • pocket pixie gold member
    June 29

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    time only changes us so much, really
    for some of us it will be our name and location
    maybe the songs get better and have more soul
    the diddling gets more ... hehe - well, anyway

    it is only time that changes
    i don't think we ever really do

    it is really good to see you back.

  • Yayyy she writes

    Ahhh Stuart GODdard. He's tongued me in a thousand dreams, ya know. He used to make me pee my pants I loved him so much. Course that was way back when he was in his 20's. He's in his mid 50's now and probably not as do-able but still.

    If I couldn't drink, smoke and diddle I might as well be dead. Course I quit drinking but that doesn't mean I'm never gonna drink again. I just quit for now. (see how i make a poem all about me?)

    You sorta lure us into thinking this might be a different UB1 in the beginning. Haha Great ending for anyone who thought this was a "poor me" poem. Those who know you know that UB never ends any poem without a little diddling.

    Love it. So glad you're posting. More Please.

    Desiree

    • Brazos silver member
      July 5
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      Speaking of more, please, you might shout that out to yourself too, ya know? UB is not the only one I don't hear much from lately...


  • Abel
    June 28

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    weren't you like 10 in the eighties...and isn't atom ant a cartoon thingy guy...lol
    anyway really enjoyed this ann its got ub written all over it cant wait to see what happens next...
    oh and by the way...what do you do...lol

    thanx for sharing
    PEACE ABEL

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