Dancing underneath the moon,
are maidens lost in tune.
Holding hands,oh so gently,
clothed in garments saying plenty!
Hair braided with flowers,
dancing, forgetting the hours.
Hearts filled with expectation,
for young men visiting the occasion.
The whispering of the evening breeze,
amongst the trees.
Anouncing the dance of June,
underneath the moon!
*Tersa*
28 June 2009
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
- June New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended July 6, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Nice rhyme to this one. I can see the picture in my mind just from your words.
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Welcome..
Oh So Beautiful!!!!!!!
Very well written.. thnk you for entering this lovely piece in our contest. Good luck!!
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
I can put music to this- it so sounds song like and whimsical. Nicely done with the prompt.
Welcome to AP and good luck in the contest.
Storm
Site Greeter -
welcome to all poetry
What a fun portrait you have painted here. Well done.
♥
Shawna
Site Greeter
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Good work, you created a nice picture in mind!
Peace!
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Welcome to All Poetry~
Very nice form poetry with lovely visuals.
Lyrical as well.
Hair braided with flowers,
dancing, forgetting the hours. I like those lines
Thank you for entering...
Warmly, CookieZeal
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