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Love me. Hate me. Date me. Break me.

Wow, relationships, lets start with part one. We get a new lover, and well its fun. You say "I love you" within two weeks time, yet you had no idea they had another in line. Your kisses are all wasted, your hugs are for not. And those I love you's? Ha, they're no longer in your spot.

Which leads me to part two of this deadly I love you. It's about distance, ladies this is your cue. Oh its to far you say? Once in a while isnt enough! He's not here to hold your hand? Well suck it up!

Now this is part three, gentelmen take the lead. You see the ladie you love, the girl of your dreams, but you can't get past her bodily flaws. Her chest too flat, her hips to broad. Your ashamed of her looks but love her personality. Well I hope you get a dose of reality, that she could be the perfect woman, but you don't give a *bunny*.

Welcome to part four of this relationship tale. This is for all you who can't find a signifigant other out there. You're always stuck as third wheel, with no one to hold. Tears well up your eyes, for you think you will remain this way until your old. Looks are blamed for the state your in, saying that is a sin. God made you amazing, beautiful, perfect in every way. So don't say that, you will find the right one someday.

My speech is almost over, but so many things I still want to say. Which ever part you fall in, you will find love anyway. Be careful of tossed I love you's, make sure their meaning will always stay the same. Find friends who will always love you, people to confide in, but I beg you please.

Don't lose hope like I did.

FINALLY BACK AND W INSPERATION! haha this is my first poem since I have returned. what do ya think?

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  • his kiss
    June 28
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    I like it...I like it a lot